My persuasive writing statement

My statement - Do I “AGREE” or “DISAGREE”...

I think kids should be aloud to play outside a lot longer than the usual time they are given. I also think the teachers should have a little time out for a while so they can get a little fresh air, and the children can give them a kit kat ( a break ). Because the kids get free time way more than the teachers. But that's because the kids need to clean out their heads before getting work, and that is really the only way the kids are able to turn their brains on for class work.

It is aloud that the pupils should be having less play time outside of the classroom and more time learning more about digital life, writing, reading, maths, inquiry, well school work is much important than playing around outside. So I think the teacher’s should make the kids do exercise during the afternoon and maybe in the morning if it isn’t pouring down. And if it is raining really badly then they can do a little warm up dance of “jump jam”.

Or if the teachers don’t want that to happen, then instead of doing exercises then stay in class and do more school work, and less playing outside than 1 hour. The children really do love playing outside but they should really be doing more school work, because probably by the time they go into class their heads will be tired out from all that playing outside. This problem that I can now see, is actually a huge problem if you look into it properly. Because the children aren't learning more than they should be, and by the time they head off to college they would probably only know 3/4 of what the teachers are explaining than what they should be. And it won’t be the student’s fault it will be the teacher’s fault.

So I agree and disagree with the situation that I just read in the text, which is to give the children less play time outside and more learning time during class. And more exercising in class so the kids don’t feel left out on playing outside more often. But I think the only reason why the kids are let out earlier it so that the teachers can finish off their unfinished work, like the children's reports, making them knew assessments, activities, WALT, tasks for them to keep them busy. Because I am in the middle of the situation, because if the children stay in more longer than the teacher’s will be pretty busy, just like the students.