Monday, 16 September 2013

The boy who flew to high

Once upon a time there lived a young little boy who lived with his father. He lived in a gi-normous castle where a kind and friendly king lived, the kings name was king Minos. The young little boy’s name is Icarus and his father’s name is Daedalus, king Minos is Icarus dad’s father. Icarus was so lucky to have no brother and sisters to look after or get bullied.

The next day Daedalus said “Icarus please come in the basement I need to talk to you” “coming father” said Icarus. So I carus went to the basement and saw his father building something. Icarus said “ dad what are you doing” Daedalus said “ trying to make wings so that you could fly. Icarus was so pleased with his father that he had built him a set of wings to fly in.

So the next day Icarus”s father told him to “wake up and come outside please”. Icarus went outside and saw the wings on the path waiting for him, his father said “ put them on and have a try” so he put it on and had a try. His father told him what to do and what not to do but Icarus did not listen.

Icarus was in the air, he was spreading out his wings and flying exactly like a bird. Then he had forgotten what all the rules that his father told him to do. So he just forgot all about it and just enjoyed his self and he flew way to close to the sun, but if he goes way too close to the water down below his wings would get soakin wet. Then he noticed that his wings were melting by the sun and there was soil coming out of it and he fell into the water (SPLASH).


Wednesday, 11 September 2013

My Punctuation Goal's

This is my punctuation goals that I am focusing on for this year. This is where I think I am at writing my paragraph's or making perfect sense. I hope you understand what I am trying to say. Enjoy me blog!

Tuesday, 10 September 2013

Xtra Maths

This here is all about xtra maths. This year was the first time getting 70 right answer's by racing the teacher, and I have been working on division my highest score ever!

Friday, 6 September 2013

Father's Day

On Friday after school I was thinking about what I could get for my dad’s birthday and father’s day. The next day I got frightened because Sunday was father’s day, then it would be my dad’s birthday the next day. So I said to my aunty “ I was just wondering if you could take me to the shop so I could buy my dad something for father’s day tomorrow” she said “ yes but you have to be quick ok”. 

Once we finished our shopping we went to buy a present for my dad and, while we were gone my mum and sisters were cooking and setting up the party. I bought my dad some flower’s and a big block of chocolate from the warehouse and, it wasn't just some ordinary chocolate it was a wonka chocolate, um delicious. 

So we went straight home and, stuck our present that we brought by the other one’s and, their was this humongous cake that my mum baked it looked yummy. So after everything was done we had a BBQ that my uncle did. After we had a wonderful time with the family on father’s, but the only thing that was so cool, is that my dad’s birthday was the next day and, I don’t know what I can buy.

Tuesday, 3 September 2013

Rhyming Couplets

A couplet is a two line poem. The last word of each line rhymes. 

I really really tried to look

For this mysteries book.

I have a really cool pet parrot
Who really loves to eat carrot.

I really really like to fly my kite
When it goes way over height.