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Birds tweeting outside my window wakened me. I pulled the blanket up closer to me, as I was exhausted, not wanting to get out of bed.  I had been shivering all night because it felt like our house was filled with cold freezing ice. There was condensation all over my window. Suddenly I saw the sun shining through my curtains and see leaves falling down from the tree on to the ground. I could hear my mum in the kitchen boiling the jug. “Hello my son” mum said to me in  loud voice as she came into my room with toast, a hot cup of chocolate and cocoa pops for my breakfast. “Thank you mum” I replied. When I finished eating my breakfast and drinking my hot chocolate I felt much better.