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Wednesday 5 June 2013

Antarctica's Long Journey


Once there was a man named josh that took a trip to Antarctica and took skate lessons  but the best thing of all was to win challenges. So he went to the practice’s he got in big trouble so he ran away and didn’t look back he got lost and he was so apprehensive. Josh had heard a earth quake he crashed into a tree and lost his ski board and he had to walk all the way back he was very scared.

He saw the helicopter but the helicopter did not see him he lost his way he was in the middle of the icy cold dessert. He saw a cave he ran quickly in the cave and he felt so sick he was so hungry then he saw a man in the cave he was so lucky cause the man in the because he had food to eat. Man felt sorry so he gave him two pieces of bread but it wasn’t nice bread it was poisoned.

The man that was in the cave he went out to find more poisoned fish josh had woken up he called the cops on the helicopter the helicopter went to find him. The man came back and josh went back to sleep josh was spying on him the man ate the poisoned fish he heard a weird phone tone he saw josh talking on the phone the man through the phone in the water.

The police had seen the man hunting josh for calling the cops and doing the right thing. The police was so proud of josh because they had lost their baby penguins and josh had them that entire time josh was proud of himself more than anyone eels. Than the police took josh home, and josh never ever went back to Antarctica again and the killer stade in jail for the rest of his life with the strong men they were real angry because it was him that made them go in jail.


1 comment:

Rebekah said...

Hi Lizara I love your writing about Antarctica.
It was so amazing and fantastic. Keep up the good work and don't give up. you are amazing at writing.

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