Once there was a girl named isabella she had a mum and two stepsisters and they never got to meet their father. He lived in france and they lived in hollywood there father used to play baseball. Isabella wanted to be the same as her father but her step sisters would always moan and they won't even agree at all.
Every lunch time @ school there will be a baseball practice. They will be going to have a tournament in two weeks time and she never misses the practices. She was better than all the other players just like her father. Isabella’s coach asked her politely if she could play for the school. She ask her mother if she could play. Her mother said,” NO you can not play because you have been grounded little girl.
She had one more sleep until the game started so she had a nice and calmest sleep she had ever had. In the morning she had breakfast, got her lunch and she sneaked quickly out the window and ran to the bus for the game. When her mum woke up her mum went to the game and saw isabella playing baseball and she was so proud of her. The end:
2 comments:
Hi Lizara,
I like the story you wrote, I loved the way you based it on a dad and a daughter. Love the writing, keep it up and make sure to proof read and then post it on to our blog!
Hi lizara I like what you wrote it was so amazing I liked the hole thing keep up the good work :)
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