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Wednesday 13 August 2014

Lizara - Tornado Explanation planing template


Question: How do waterspouts form?
Explain why the population of the world has grown so rapidly, why it is an issue and ways in which this could be solved.

Key words in the question:
Introductory sentence: A waterspout is quite similar to a tornado, but the only difference is that the waterspout occurs over all the water. It is like a wet air of pillar that looks like a gigantic (huge) mushroom that connects to the surface on the water from the sky. Or something like a magical beanstalk which grows very tall, and tall enough to reach the sky.
What are you trying to explain? I am trying to explain the meanings of the story, and rewriting what the main idea is all about. And especially explaining what the story actually means and introducing the topic, that say’s in the very first sentence.
How: If the conditions (weather) is not in the perfect place. And if the puffy cottons wool cumulous, is not in the right place then that is one reason why it starts. And when the wind has been making movements in the air.
Who: The waterspouts or quite similar to a tornado.
When: It can happen when something is going wrong and if the weather is in a bad condition or place.
Why: ( DO NOT KNOW WHY? THERE IS KNOW REASON WHY)
Where: Well this can thing (waterspout - tornado) occur all over the entire world.
What points do you need to include? Well the main point that you would need to include is the key words that is in the story. Adding more information into your story, and making it more interesting.
What are the key words, ideas or information that you will need to use to answer the question? Decide on examples to support your ideas/illustrate your point.
How will you sequence your explanation? By writing more interesting words and sticking to 1 main idea, and introduce what the topic is.
Decide how to order your ideas and choose some linking words that may be suitable.
How will you end your explanation?  Ending it with a good hook to make the reader want to read more of your story. Add a lot of punctuation, controlling the way you do you complex and simple sentences. Make sure you are adding interesting vocab and adverbial clauses.
Is there a general statement that you can make to sum up your ideas? Well it all depends on what the story is about and what you are going to be making a statement about. If your writing about something that happened in the weekend or holidays, that you enoyed or if something bad went wrong. Or something that you are doing right know.


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