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Friday 19 October 2012

My narrative writing:

As you can see there is a picture of Pt England shops and cars, trucks and some other people.
Start your writing here:

On a summer day a girl named Emma was walking across the round when the light was red so she can buy her a ice blocks because it was a really hot day. Then she bade for it and said thank you very much for the ice block then she ate it on the seat out side of the shops.

When the girl was eating her ice-block a angry boy came over and pushed the girl and the girls ice block dropped on the ground so the girl started crying. The boy did not say sorry and apologised to the girl.

Then the girl called the cops and said kwik, kwik come somebody is trying to kidnap me then the cops arrived and said why are you giving this poor girl a fight you have been arrested.

The little girl got two dollars from the police so she could buy her another ice-block and the girl was ea5ing her ice-block while skipping all the way home glad and happy and she lived happily ever after.



The end:

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