My Punctuation Goal's

This is my punctuation goals that I am focusing on for this year. This is where I think I am at writing my paragraph's or making perfect sense. I hope you understand what I am trying to say. Enjoy me blog!

Xtra Maths

This here is all about xtra maths. This year was the first time getting 70 right answer's by racing the teacher, and I have been working on division my highest score ever!

Father's Day

On Friday after school I was thinking about what I could get for my dad’s birthday and father’s day. The next day I got frightened because Sunday was father’s day, then it would be my dad’s birthday the next day. So I said to my aunty “ I was just wondering if you could take me to the shop so I could buy my dad something for father’s day tomorrow” she said “ yes but you have to be quick ok”. 

Once we finished our shopping we went to buy a present for my dad and, while we were gone my mum and sisters were cooking and setting up the party. I bought my dad some flower’s and a big block of chocolate from the warehouse and, it wasn't just some ordinary chocolate it was a wonka chocolate, um delicious. 

So we went straight home and, stuck our present that we brought by the other one’s and, their was this humongous cake that my mum baked it looked yummy. So after everything was done we had a BBQ that my uncle did. After we had a wonderful time with the family on father’s, but the only thing that was so cool, is that my dad’s birthday was the next day and, I don’t know what I can buy.

Rhyming Couplets

A couplet is a two line poem. The last word of each line rhymes. 

I really really tried to look

For this mysteries book.

I have a really cool pet parrot
Who really loves to eat carrot.

I really really like to fly my kite
When it goes way over height.

My Punctuation Goals

The three little pigs

                                            listen to ‘Lizara the three little pig's’ on Audioboo

Once upon a time on an old farm lived three little pigs, who lived with there mum and dad. The first little pig was the noisy one. The second pig was the stupid one. Finally the third pig was the smart one of all his brother’s. The next day the three little pigs had decided to leave their mother and father, to see the world and make new friend’s. They were roaming through the woods and over plains, they were playing games and having a lot of fun. Know one was as happy as the three little pigs, and they easily made friends with everyone. As summer drew to close, they realised that folk was drifting back to their usual jobs. Once it got darker the three little pigs, went to the supermarket to buy things, to make there house’s. The first piglet said “ I’m gonna make my house out of hay”, so he brought him some hay and went away to try and find a place to build his home. The second little pig said “ I’m gonna buy me some sticks to build my house”, so he brought him some sticks and went away to try and find a quiet place to build his house. Then the third little pig said “ I’m gonna buy me some bricks to build my house”, so he went away and started to build his house. Then the BIG BAD WOLF came and started to blow the pig’s houses. He went to the first little pig and said “hey let me in or else i’ll your house down” then the little pig said “no go and find your own house” so the wolf huffed and he puffed and blew the house down. The little pig ran away and went to the other pigs house and the wolf said “ let me in or I will blow your house down” so he huffed and he puffed and he blew the house down. Then the ran to the third little pigs house and locked the door, the wolf said “ hey open the door or I will blow your house down” so he huffed and he puffed and it didn’t work so he huffed and he puffed and it still didn’t work. So he went on top of the house and went down the chimney, but lucky the third little pig was smart because he put on a hot boiling water on top of the fire. The wolf fell into the pot of boiling water and he got (HOT) so he quickly ran outside and never had seen the three little pigs since then.

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This story that I am writing about is the three little pigs the reason why I am writing this story is because it is an easy story to retell and they kind of act like my sisters.

The moral of this story is

to buy cheap stuff and

use your brain.

The ugly duckling

listen to ‘The ugly duckling by lizara’ on Audioboo

Once upon a time on an old farm lived a mother duck and her seven baby eggs. Mother duck was sitting on a clutch of new eggs. One day her six chirpy eggs started to hatch 1,2,3,4,5,6 chirpy eggs hatched but the seventh one didn’’t. The last egg was bigger and when it started to hatch the last duck had grey feathers and he ate more food than his brother ducklings.

When mother duck told the ducklings to have a swim in the pond all the ducklings were being nasty and mean to the ugly duckling, he was so upset.  Once all the ducklings and mother duck went to sleep the ugly duckling ran away to try and find his family that he looked like. Then a man saw the ugly duckling and took  him inside for dinner and water. Once he got bigger the old farmer let the ugly duckling free.

Once the ugly duckling got free he went back to the old farm and found his real family, he was so happy and so was his family. The ugly duckling was back with his brothers and his mother duck but when he looked in the pond he had seen that he had changed and grown way too big.  Then they went back to the nest to have dinner and they lived happily ever after.