Showing posts with label show not tell week 8. Show all posts
Showing posts with label show not tell week 8. Show all posts
Tuesday, 15 April 2014
Show not tell week 8
"I can't go to sleep it is so hard" Maddie said. Screeaaccchhh!" What is that screeching noise" Maddie mumbled to herself. I peaked out of my blanket and saw a strange shadow shaped as a ghost.”I could hear the voice of a ghost” My heart started pounding my mouth dried up and I started shaking uncontrollably, begging for Mercy. “I screamed out my loudest”.
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