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The three little pigs

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Once upon a time on an old farm lived three little pigs, who lived with there mum and dad. The first little pig was the noisy one. The second pig was the stupid one. Finally the third pig was the smart one of all his brother’s. The next day the three little pigs had decided to leave their mother and father, to see the world and make new friend’s. They were roaming through the woods and over plains, they were playing games and having a lot of fun. Know one was as happy as the three little pigs, and they easily made friends with everyone. As summer drew to close, they realised that folk was drifting back to their usual jobs. Once it got darker the three little pigs, went to the supermarket to buy things, to make there house’s. The first piglet said “ I’m gonna make my house out of hay”, so he brought him some hay and went away to try and find a place to build his home. The second little pig said “ I’m gonna buy me some sticks to build my house”, so he brought him some sticks and went away to try and find a quiet place to build his house. Then the third little pig said “ I’m gonna buy me some bricks to build my house”, so he went away and started to build his house. Then the BIG BAD WOLF came and started to blow the pig’s houses. He went to the first little pig and said “hey let me in or else i’ll your house down” then the little pig said “no go and find your own house” so the wolf huffed and he puffed and blew the house down. The little pig ran away and went to the other pigs house and the wolf said “ let me in or I will blow your house down” so he huffed and he puffed and he blew the house down. Then the ran to the third little pigs house and locked the door, the wolf said “ hey open the door or I will blow your house down” so he huffed and he puffed and it didn’t work so he huffed and he puffed and it still didn’t work. So he went on top of the house and went down the chimney, but lucky the third little pig was smart because he put on a hot boiling water on top of the fire. The wolf fell into the pot of boiling water and he got (HOT) so he quickly ran outside and never had seen the three little pigs since then.

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This story that I am writing about is the three little pigs the reason why I am writing this story is because it is an easy story to retell and they kind of act like my sisters.

The moral of this story is

to buy cheap stuff and

use your brain.

The ugly duckling

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Once upon a time on an old farm lived a mother duck and her seven baby eggs. Mother duck was sitting on a clutch of new eggs. One day her six chirpy eggs started to hatch 1,2,3,4,5,6 chirpy eggs hatched but the seventh one didn’’t. The last egg was bigger and when it started to hatch the last duck had grey feathers and he ate more food than his brother ducklings.

When mother duck told the ducklings to have a swim in the pond all the ducklings were being nasty and mean to the ugly duckling, he was so upset.  Once all the ducklings and mother duck went to sleep the ugly duckling ran away to try and find his family that he looked like. Then a man saw the ugly duckling and took  him inside for dinner and water. Once he got bigger the old farmer let the ugly duckling free.

Once the ugly duckling got free he went back to the old farm and found his real family, he was so happy and so was his family. The ugly duckling was back with his brothers and his mother duck but when he looked in the pond he had seen that he had changed and grown way too big.  Then they went back to the nest to have dinner and they lived happily ever after.   

A easy way to solve division problems

In term 2 we had been learning how to solve problems by using our place value's with Mr Somerville.

In the holidays

On the last day of school my best friend had to leave our school and move house so her and her sister went to a different school. When they left to another school it got borring and there were less girls in the class it was so borring because most of the girls had know one to play with. Al the boys were happy so we dsighded to have a shared lunch on the last day of school to celebrate for my friend's last day but the only thing that was borring was that they had to leave Pt Enfland.


The next day was holiday Mr Burt was telling the school that there was a funky bouny castle going on in G.I but I wans'nt allowed to go. So we went to the beach instead and disighded to go next week because my mum said"Its on every saturdays" and it was. Before we went to the beach we went shopping in G.I and once we came home my Nan and cousin arived they were waiting for my aunty Julian, she works so hard.


On sunday my aunty came to pick me and my big sister up for the night, so that my cousins would have some one to play with, but we really didn't won to go she s pretty anoying some times. It was so borring at the time we got there we had nothing to play with but lucky we brang our netbooks she had internet at her house so we started to do our homework well she had to do her homework I had know homework to do it was amazing free time, but then I relized that I had to blog post so I did more homework "DAM IT".


When it was 7.30 I remembered that X FACTOR was on so me and my sister went up stairs and watched it was amazing there all great singers. My sister goes for More-House and Whenua Patuwai I do to but mainly Whenua because he is an awesome singer just like More House and the others, it go borring when Gap 5 had to go home, a long time ago. When it got darker we fell asleep my aunty was wondering where me and my sister was she never knew that we went up stairs so she woke us up and we watched another movie and had Ice-cream, pop corn and fizzy drinks it was cool after all pluss I never new that they were watching it in the sitting room.


Once it was morning my mum and dad came to pick me and my sister up from my aunty's house we were ready to go and we said "good by" to uncle, aunty and cousin amba. When we went home we had hot chips and more fizzy I was like yea this is the best holiday ever and my sister was like this is the goodiest holiday ever. We were enjoying our selves I was playing out side with my sisters teaching them how to play net-ball with there friends while my big sister was resting in the room all alone with my uncle who snours a lot when he sleeps ohh I felt so sorry for her so she went in my room and she was cuntherble and she was better so we all played together..

One Day

On Monday morning we had to clean up and get out side to play more games and meet more friends because our old naboured had move house and we had a brand new family next door to my house they were very kind. When they first moved in the house it got boring, but when they started to play outside we met them more, and they kept baking cake and muffins for us. Her son was going to our school and he was in room 14 he was so quite in class and he barely even talks to people know one knew what his voice sounded like. Every lunch time he would go to this girl and say hi, good by, how have you been and she was the only one that he would take to his secret girl friend is in room 13 but know one knows that it was some one in room 13 or room 14 know one knew.

School Holiday

On Sturday afternoon my sister's friends came over to see if she was allowed to go Pt England Beach for a while, so she went with her friends and I went with my friends to the pools next door to my house. While me and Martha my older sister went out with our friends parents my mum and dad took my little sisters to the park and they went shopping. When we finnished swimming my friends mum came to pick us up and we had lunch at her house we had hot chips and pan cakes when we all went home I asked my mum if I could sleep over and mum said "Yes".


The next day my friend cam to pick me up and my sisters friends mum came to pick her up too. When it dark time we went to the movies and watched Camp Rock 1 and Step up 2 that was the best night ever because we got to eat pop corn and drink cocoa cola. After the movies were finnished we went home and had dinner Mc Donald, then we went to bed and had the best night sleep ever.


In the morning we had coco pops for breakfast and then my mum and dad came to pick me up to go home then I said"that was the best sleep over ever" and I said"thank you very much see you next time". Before we went home we had lunch and then we went to pick up my sister from her friends house and then we all went home together. Me and my sister had the best day and night of our life we also went to the super murket and brought more goodies yummy.